This is just an excerpt I wrote a few days ago that will be included somewhere in the (currently nameless) sequel to my Outsiders fanfic, Don't Think Twice, It's All Right.

Right now it reads more like an original piece because it only features my two main OCs, Jack and Eleanor, but it's not very long -- close to a page and a half, typed on Word -- so obviously it'll be added on to as everything comes together. I'm trying not to work so on the sequel until I finish Don't Think Twice but this just came to me and I wanted to write it down before I forgot entirely.

The only warning I could give for this is that it deals with drugs, but it's very vague yet. I don't know why I bother giving warnings, most of you can deal with this stuff, lol.

( It had been no more accidental ... )

I would appreciate feedback even if you're not familiar with my fic. I like concrit so if something seems wrong or unrealistic or out of place, please let me know. Thanks. :)

<3 Sarah

If you're reading this, you were probably directed from the link in my FF.net profile, or the link that I provided to this entry from the latest entry in my personal journal.

This is a list that will detail all of the changes I have made while editing my fanfiction, Don't Think Twice, It's All Right.

If you are reading my fic, please take a moment to look over this list, as it will only help you to avoid confusion. Warning: if you are not reading the fic, but are planning to, there are a couple of spoilers, so just be wary of that.

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Some minor changes include shortened author’s notes, as well as the chapter titles—in the drop-down box, they all include extra song lyrics from the song that precedes the chapter.

Other major changes (I changed a lot of the music because there were certain songs that, after listening to them, I felt fit a lot better with the story than the original songs):


Chapter One:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Girl,” by The Beatles.

Chapter Two:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Turn-Down Day,” by The Cyrkle.

Chapter Three:
* No major changes.

Chapter Four:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Friday on My Mind,” by The Easybeats.

Chapter Five:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “No Expectations,” by The Rolling Stones.

Chapter Six:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Scarborough Fair/Canticle,” by Simon and Garfunkel.
* Changed Eleanor’s cat’s name to Inka, as paying my own personal homage to my aunt’s cat of the same name (I thought the story behind her name was adorable, and I could picture Eleanor having a cat with that name for the exact same reason; Chapter Six explains it, so if you want to go back and read that, it’s towards the end).
* Also took out the song Eleanor was listening to on the radio at the end—“Navy Blue,” by Diane Renay—because that song came out in 1964, so it probably would no longer have been played on the radio as Chapter Six exists in 1967. It just didn’t seem realistic to me, so I removed that.

Chapter Seven:
* Changed the song that Soda and Eleanor were listening to on the radio to “Carrie Anne,” by The Hollies. There was a stanza that I felt fit better with the situation.

Chapter Eight:
* No major changes.

Chapter Nine:
* No major changes.

Chapter Ten:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Mona Lisas and Mad Hatters,” by Elton John.
* Made a few subtle wording/situation changes to avoid clichés, as well as a minor setting change for realism.

Chapter Eleven:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Tangerine,” by Led Zeppelin.

Chapter Twelve:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “The Wind,” by Cat Stevens.
* Made a few minor wording changes. I also changed the suggestion of “Eleanor should start working at the gas station” to “Eleanor should just look for a job,” because it was brought to my attention via the Outsiders message board that girls working at gas stations in the Sixties was very unrealistic unless it was a family business. Thank God for that message board, lol.

Chapter Thirteen:
* No major changes.

Chapter Fourteen:
* Made a few minor wording changes, some of them to go along with the job thing.

Chapter Fifteen:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Twentieth Century Fox,” by The Doors.
* More wording changes to go along with the job thing.
* I included a bit of an explanation in the author’s note at the end; I felt I had to clarify something before anybody decided to jump down my throat.

Chapter Sixteen:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Slip Kid,” by The Who.
* A few more wording changes.
* I changed Eleanor’s co-worker’s name to Carla Lombardi. Antonela was too unrealistic for the time period, I realized, even if she was supposed to be Italian; Carla Lombardi sounded just as Italian to me, but much more fitting for the time period (sorry that sounded so redundant).
* I changed the end author’s note to explain why I mentioned every soldier’s name in Soda and Steve’s platoon—that author’s note now will explain it better than I can again, so I would suggest reading that.

Chapter Seventeen:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Norwegian Wood (This Bird Has Flown),” by The Beatles.
* Changed Jack’s last name to McLagan. I liked Pace, but this one was just more fitting—and it works better for the upcoming sequel I’ve got planned.

Chapter Eighteen:
* No major changes.

Chapter Nineteen:
* No major changes.

Chapter Twenty:
* No major changes.

Chapter Twenty-One:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “Flaming,” by Pink Floyd. It fit better with the goings-on in that chapter, and I explained why in the end author’s note.
* Made a few wording changes in order to make Eleanor’s LSD experience seem more realistic.

Chapter Twenty-Two:
* Changed the chapter’s preceding song lyrics to “That’s the Way,” by Led Zeppelin.
* Made a few very subtle wording changes.

Chapter Twenty-Three:
* No major changes.

Chapter Twenty-Four:
* No major changes.

Chapter Twenty-Five:
* No major changes.

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I recently realized that there are now a lot of songs from Almost Famous in this story, LOL. But, that's completely fine -- that is a wonderful movie with such great music, and it's actually been inspiring this story more, surprisingly.

Thanks for reading! Now go read Chapter Twenty-Six. :)

<3 Sarah